You cut a bunch of corners on the art and animation, not a whole lot of love went into it. This is way beneath the skill level you demonstrated in /V/ Rage, both the remake and the original. This feels like an amateurs work and I get the impression that the VHS effect was meant to cover that up to a degree, masquerading as atmospheric. Speaking of, the VHS effect makes this nearly unwatchable. I think the biggest sin is that, coming from you, this could have been leaps and bounds more impressive.