It isnt bad at all, but try to make smoother movements and longer animations. You have a lot of potential, keep up the good work
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Just judge me as hard as you can. I dare you! (If I fail the exam for this I'll give you the rights to delete this from newgrounds.)
text at the end says: End (or is it the end?)
no it's not, deadass! (I'm too exited for this. why am I? I'll get like 2 stars max for this. I still like it enough to share it with you guys and get some of those good critisims. :D)
ORI-TAGGART responds:
Thank you. your comment is much appreciated. ^-^
