Holy crap, Pencilmate is dead!!!

Nifty ideas in this one

Wow I must say you bring some nifty ideas into this one and you make them work well, the animation does some very smooth flow aswell, you are talented in many ways, I would love to see more action scenes now and then but overall this was pretty good, It really is pleasing to know that with all the flash movies out there that there is still something new here and there in the portal, so keep up that vibe of things. This was a good Discovery It was a Victory if you ask me and it Suited the element perfectly.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Seems like you could put a bunch of these together in one entry.

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you should give warning when the bomb explodes because it can hurt people's eyes

This one really was the bomb. XD One of the more creative cover images too, gradient-fill and all! Ending was to be expected but... it is as well as you'd expect it to be! Nice fade at the ending too, while still showing just the right enough signs of life. Good stuff.

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Nice ending twist. It reminds me of the old Mickey cartoons or Oswald cartoons.