Your characters need to interact with the ground they're walking on, not be sliding as you have them. Cutting camera angles without showing how they get from A to B feels extremely disjointed. You have a lot to work on.
Ivan and Maggie,Two Treasure Hunters, finally find The Stone, the most precious gem ever! But Maggie falls for the Stone's Magic...
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Your characters need to interact with the ground they're walking on, not be sliding as you have them. Cutting camera angles without showing how they get from A to B feels extremely disjointed. You have a lot to work on.
Yes, the walking is always a pain. This is an old video I uploaded just to try the system, is something I made about three years ago.
Well made characters and environment
Why did I think this was going somewhere dirty and perverted?
Have I seen too many freaky Japanese news animated?
I may be too used to paper and pixel art on this site for a new art style on Newgrounds.
Not a very good story, but the "3D" animation was well done, as much as I've seen ever.
How about some voice acting? Crack a "stoner" joke or two.
Thanks for watching and the advices!
It has no voice over because it has born as part of my portfolio, I'm working on more with voices... I hope you will watch them too!