I find it pretty odd, except for the artstyle. If you look to it a bit more clearly, some parts feel more like animation gifs that was pasted in there. Also, that long intro with all the credits is best suggested to leave in the last few seconds of the animation. This might already bore the audience that are viewing the animation. So, let me recap: Good artstyle, a few parts are like animation gifs that loop about, and the long intro kind of deters people. Still, decently done.