Hop aboard the Super Train Warrior Express with Conductor Merrack, Chef Boona and the Man of muscle Tyrone-Sama through their many misadventures in their world!
Episode 1
Credits: Animation: Stickmanlolz(Alden)
Post-Production:Stickmanlolz(Alden)
Merrack: Stickmanlolz(Alden)
Boona: Monet
Tyrone-sama: Johnny (Steel)
Customer: Kris
Music: https://www.bensound.com/
Sound Effects: https://freesound.org/
Ok the outro art was pretty good. A animation was a lil confusing at parts, but that’s expected since you made this ages ago. It was pretty funny in parts such as Boona preparing Pocky. And the voice acting. The part with the store was pretty funny, too. How the train falling was animated was smooth as hell. Why was the outro so long? Give the viewer some more beef in the episode instead of having a long outro. You have improved quite a lot since this animation, so be proud of yourself.
Thanks for the honest review, my highschool self would have loved to read this lol. The outro was so long because I got caught up sketching a bunch of stuff, and wanted to try out features of the animation program I just got my hands on, I didnt know how it worked, but my fundamentals from Flipnotes carried me through, this is why it was mainly made up of MS Paint drawings and tweening.
Coolio
Oooh YEAH Coolio!