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Hey! I'm new to animating so i'd like it if you could give some feedback on what could improve!
I posted this video on my YouTube channel, if you would like to check it! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C2azSucli7U

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Loved it! Could use some more gore. That would be exciting!

Certainly not a bad step into animation. It looks like you've got a knack for it!

I'd recommend integrating a story more than anything else. Stick figures fighting are all over Newgrounds and YouTube at this point, but a good story or interesting hook for an animation is always novel and welcome.

Looking forward to seeing more!

MikeUnknown responds:

Thank you! Next one is definitly gonne have more of a story line to it!

This was actually pretty well done homie! Couple things on stuff you can improve on! One thing I saw was where he summoned the sword, his legs just sort of froze in place while the rest of his torso was able to move. Try keeping the whole body constantly moving, especially with a fight scene. Another thing was the stretching of the model, though keeping the body in fluid motion should help with this. I really loved how he just disappeared out of existence and came back, switching targets and demolishing the both of them. That was really smooth and really well done!

MikeUnknown responds:

Thank you so much! And thanks for the tips i will work on it for sure!

Credits & Info

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Votes
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Score
2.60 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 2, 2017
9:11 AM EDT
Genre
Action