No animation, lots of grammar issues, no real story, hard to tell what's going on, possibly copyrighted music that seems just sort of thrown together. Not really digging this at all!
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No animation, lots of grammar issues, no real story, hard to tell what's going on, possibly copyrighted music that seems just sort of thrown together. Not really digging this at all!
I would suggest animating rather than showing lots of still images, and fixing your speech bubbles so they look cleaner.