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Reverend Ballard Baptist Mallard: Honk!

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Reverend Ballard Baptist Mallard: Ep 2 Honk!

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Wasn't horrible.. but honestly it could have been a LOT better with VERY little extra work - using motion tweens for the mouth looked cheap - and would've been less work to use more mouth in-betweens anyway.. - Also - the audio was really bad - I turned my pc all the way up - then the vid.. then finally the vol on my speakers ALL THE WAY UP - and they're LOUD speakers.. still could only barely hear half of it. It wasn't a bad idea for a toon.. and wasn't the worst thing I've seen on here by far though haha. I'm really not tryna be a jerk - but morely tryna give constructive criticism cuz I think this coulda been a lot better w less work put in even.

Last helpful advice I can give though - the idea was pretty good -could've been hilarious.. but it was drug out WAY too long - you could have definitely gotten this idea across with half the time or even less. . Including some punch lines - and it would've held my attention much more. Work smarter - not harder :) - other than that - good work - will hope to see more from you with more learnt and hopefully a better production next time! - 3 stars - not bad.. I actually liked it.. but it couldve been improved a lot w less work actually! :)

SvenReyter responds:

Thanks for the advice.

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Aug 19, 2017
10:34 PM EDT