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My First Animation

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This my first animation just trying to get the feel of animating. I plan to add a lot more to this soon.

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Try to cut out those repeat frames between the end of the one cycle and the beginning of the next. There should only be one frame of the "neutral" state, other wise it looks like the character is stopping every time they take two steps, then taking two more steps, then stopping, and so forth.

Otherwise, it looks pretty cool, I like the style, and unlike everyone else's comments I think the big feet is unique and makes the character feel more personalized :)

Last recommendation I have would be to put some more effort into the backgrounds to make them more interesting! But I get that this is mostly a test, so it's forgivable.

Nantendo responds:

Right, i actually added the last couple frames of the cycle in because it looked worse before like a big gap but i see what you mean. But thnx a lot bro lol appreciate the comments

I Love It Great Job (>^ω^<)

Nantendo responds:

Thnks a lot!

The character feet are HUGE! other than that it looks ok.

Nantendo responds:

I wanted the shoes & pants to be big but maybe they are a lil too big lol thnx for the review

Credits & Info

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1,022
Votes
100
Score
1.70 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 17, 2017
3:30 AM EDT
Genre
Experimental