Well, the visuals were all good. Nice mix of the painted backgrounds with the cartoony characters. The audio sounded good, too. It's just that pretty much none of the jokes were funny. ... Not sure what else to say :D Work on the comedy.
lol that was a surprise at the end, feels kinda incomplete tho , this story. Amusing and nice animation
I'm definitely working on my next cartoon that will have more gags and feels finished.