It has potential, with a little bit more work I think this could look great. Work with field of vision of your character and the angles of the perspective. But for now, I don't think this would have any merit to be in the portal right now. I'm sorry if I come off as harsh.
no need to be sorry. i appreciate it. I feel the same way for the most part. i think my next one is gonna blow all my previous animations out the water tho. :\ hope you stick around for that