Shrimpz Episode 1: My 110%
Luther works at a dead end corporate job for Home Intl, a nationwide chain of assisted living facilities. He's starting to think that the company doesn't value him and that his boss doesn't even know his name.
I've seen some of your work. And all I really wanna say is. Don't force yourself to upload cartoons as often as you can. Cause it seems like you work on them maybe for a day or two. Take 2 weeks to make a cartoon. Maybe three. Maybe even a month. Just to improove. Cause you're not gonna get far with rushing everything.
Thank you. It's never easy to receive criticism but, I do appreciate the feedback. I have been working on a long form piece of animation which has been killing me so I've been sprinting though some easy pieces but, that's no excuse... I feel like I need to keep my schedule in order to drive my improvement. However I will keep your feedback in the back of my mind going further. Thanks!
I'm sorry if i won't be able to be positive, but this is not quality content. I know it may be a learning experience for now, but until you learn how to animate and draw, i can't give it a good review.
First off, study anatomy, people find good anatomy to be pleasing, don't try the easy way thinking it will work out wonders.
Secondly, the animation was really bad, it was not synched to the audio and really served no purpose other than to flail the arms of the characters around some times.
Finally, the audio was garbage, the intro song was incomprehensible and the voice acting was mediocre.
To sum it up, it was a mediocre and unfunny cartoon at best, git gud.
Thank you for the feedback. You bring up some very good points. Like, I really do need to re-record and clean up that opening song. I am at a point where I am trying new approaches and styles. I'm very sorry to hear that this piece was so distasteful to you but I will venture to incorporate your suggests into future projects.