Oh, so it's a demo.
Not really sure what it's doing here but whatevs.
Well for starters, It looks nice although there isn't much to show here aside from the visuals.
Next time make sure to show some stuff you can do to excite the people to play this game. Also make sure the game doesn't run like garbage next time and that the presentation is better than the powerpoint presentation style you have now.
As a movie, it's not good.
As a game, it look like it's missing stuff that should have been there already.
and as a whole, It not THAT interesting but I'm curious to see what'll come next.