Well these are funny, they kind of remind me of old style toons with no real dialog but more visual effects and all and thats a good thing, love the little sounds and all on these also very fun yet short animations, you should think about having them run off the paper onto the desk at times it would be kind of interesting, and entertaining ofcourse. And so here we come to the end of the review, dont want to drag the review on forever but in a nutshell I found this flash entertaining and somewhat amusing, could use a few fixes here and there as explained below, keep up with the style you got going its good, and be more creative and more random. you can never go wrong with beingtoo random, anyways good luck.
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Run off the paper and into desks and tables and stuff that would be a cool idea.
A simple but alluring short, witty title and all. :) Seems the blue, red and yellow theme wasn't picked up right from the start, but the voice acting and animation's just as good back here as it is in the new... nice start to an what's turned into a pretty incredible series! And an animation with a message too, even though the end... doesn't make sense at all. XD
Guess it has gotten better with the times... but good beginnings!
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This was a very good short animation. Reminds me of something I would see on TV as a kid.