Not bad, but not exactly brimming with greatness. It is competent, but it really hasn't hooked my interest, saved for the fact that Cinema Snob is involved. Now that is a name I have not heard in a long time, not since I stopped browsing TGWTG. Curious to see him branch out like this, maybe it will gain him relevance again.
Back to the work itself, there is a somewhat... Generic feel to it. Unfortunately I am unable to provide much in terms of constructive criticism, seeing as my mind is currently in a stagnant mush state. But I do see at least some potential for it to grow if you were to refine it further. In what way, I do not know. But I will be keeping a slow eye on this series if it develops further.