the voice quality was very bad, much like the humor and animation. It wasn't funny at all. You tried to use the same joke of twitter over and over and it jsut doesn't work. The way you used tweens made all of the animation look very robotic. Try to use some animation techniques such as slow in and out. Watch the video by alan becker about animation techniques, its a good watch, you will learn a lot. Plus don't be lazy, take more time, do some frame by frame animation. Get someone to look over your script and if you don't have a script...MAKE A SCRIPT.