This was really cute, funny and stylish. However, the voice acting and sound mixing is VERY rough around the edges. There's also plenty of room for improvement in terms of the artwork, but I can still see the effort in every single frame! You've got a damn keen eye for visual storytelling and the pacing is fantastic. Keep on growing and animating, my dude! 😉

This was a pretty good one! The animation is fluid and has a good pace, also the artwork itself is pretty creative in my opinion. However, the voice acting could use a lot more improvement. It doesn't help that the music tends to be louder than the voice acting. Just remember to amplify the lines if you ever make a next project like this one. But still, I really did enjoy this submission. If this were to be a legit series, I would really watch it. You and your team did a great job, and I hope you get a good grade on this. Truly a piece of art! :)