Quite a few spelling errors, also very long and kind of rambling. The animation of the text looked good. I hope you own the rights to the music.
What is the vision?
Well, watch this video
Quite a few spelling errors, also very long and kind of rambling. The animation of the text looked good. I hope you own the rights to the music.
Sorry. My deadline for this was only a week, so everything was quite rushed.