Eddsworld rip-off
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Rick and his friends discover a mysterious UFO!
Alright; Here's some FAQ's that I think you might have with this animation:
Q - You ripped off Eddsworld!
A - Edd Gould was an incredible animator and really inspiring creator to me. I really enjoy the show's concept and format being so simple but is also so open to tons of creative Ideas. I wanted to see what I could do with that idea myself and see where I could take it.
Q - The ending doesn't make sense.
A - This is a follow up to an animation I made in 2014. If you would like to see it, click here: (MAJOR CRINGE ALERT) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NT4Rhlk5HRA&list=PLEUXCPP6NOOoUTA0EyoYaGrp734x3xL8P&index=1
Q - The voices are awful! KILL YOURSELF
A - Will Do. I voice all my characters, and I'm certainly not the best. It might be pretty cringeworthy for some. I'm open for criticism.
Thank you for watching!
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Eddsworld rip-off
In my opinion your intro is a little bit too long with 20 sec. and about half of its time was black-screen.
The animation is quite smooth, but the background and the environment are very simple and there are too few details. Sometimes the shades of the face and the body are facing different directions, I know it's a lot of work and it is not that important.
The characters need more character, or at least point them out a little more.
Besides, the story could be worked out a little further, e.g. with more jokes or allusions.
-Luke could asked:"Where does the flag come from? / Why do you cary a flag with you?" "I'm just prepared." Then show a closet full of red flags.
Then about the voices. Pls regulate them to the same volume, otherwise it is a pain. KILL YOURSELF ;D!
I'm probably that hard, because it remains me of Edd. *tear of joy*
It is still a solid and enjoyable animation, good work.
Still open for criticism?
Thank you! I really appreciate the critisim. The show is suppose to be incredibly nonsensical, plus the continuity is all over the place. I'm happy you made this review for me, as this gives me a pointer on where the show should be heading. My goal is to give these characters a balance of nature, Charlie being the extreme of cynicism and death, but being the most intelligent. Luke however, is being the other extreme of happiness and light, but also is incredibly stupid. Rick is supposed to be more or less the middle ground (which makes him bland I guess) and that's how I want to take the series in a character driven direction. Thank you for your review, I will try to add your critisim in the future. (Also, I'll try to get actual good voice actors too.)