the claymation was probably the best I've seen on Newgrounds but the problem is that it still has that occasional camera jerk that throws everything off, and in certain frames you can see the shadows you cast- to fix this I recommend taking the photos remotely and have strong lights coming at all angles- what really killed this movie though was the lack of sound and music until the end where a song suddenly jumps in.
Sound is what makes things feel real and entertaining and lacking that has turned this animation that could have been great into something bad.