I'm an atheist.

Animation is poor, barely any sound, CONSTANT EYE LOOPS, Stay on you-tube, all we need around here is some hard dicks and gay jizz flying into crevices of unknown origin.
Thank you.

I understand you want to attract people to read the bible, but why not use a plot from the book itself?

Those sentences you quoted are within a certain context, and although you tried to create a story to insert them, they just seem out of context. I would be interested to watch an illustration of the real story behind them (I honestly didn't get to read them all since they only showed up for a very short time).

Most people may not be interested in a strange language (archaic English) and may not get the other references you illustrated, I am no exception.
My suggestion is to take a real story and animate it with a real voice with your words/interpretation (which supposedly will be understood by most people).

Or... You could take a bunch of stuff that normally people have no idea about and make them curious enough to check it by themselves. For example... Did you know that:
- Adam lived for 930 years? (Gen 5:4)
- Noah is the great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-grandson of Adam and he lived 20 years more than him? (Gen 9:26)
- Nimrod was Noah's grandson and he was the first mighty/great man and at the same time the first hunter/bowman that was referenced in the bible as such? (Gen 10:8)... And he supposedly founded/ruled Babel...

Just take your pick, with these kind of extraordinary references you don't even need to spend much time animating or trying to make people read quotes.