This is my first animation for newgrounds.
I'm still new to this site.
Constructive criticism is welcomed. Helpful advice is needed.
It wasnt terrible. The bore does come in because there isnt a major deep story involved but its a simple flash so it doesnt really need it. Some people will demand it however. I didnt have a problem with the over all animation though I thought it was pretty good
U have some talent.. keep it up buddy.. hole to see some great anim..
Put more time into it, animation isn't bad but not a whole lot happens either. Why is that character the lone warrior? what or who are they stopping to look at before continue their forlorn walk across the screen? where are they going? where did they come from? answer these questions with a story put it into frames to see how it turns out
Thank you for criticizing. Yes, there isn't a story; my next animations will definitely have those. This is in the experimental category for a reason. If I had posted this animation in the action, drama or comedy category, your points would be much stronger. I intend to create a story around this in the future. I just wanted to experiment and have some feedback on what they thought of the animation or something. Again, thank you for the criticism.