great job man! your 3d sense is really strong and your storytelling is great! the animation could be timed/composed better at parts but for the most part it's really well done!
some things I noticed were when the spider first waved the motion of the wave was evenly timed where as it should probably be darting back and forth with eases on the ends of the arc. also, when the vase was tilting both in the horizontal and the circular motions it wasn't fully believable. when it rocked horizontally it seemed to bend instead of tilt back and forth and while the circular motion was drawn well it was titled a little too far outwards.
hope that helps!
Thanks man! I keep those details in mind for next time!
This is great, man! I like how thought out it is, it really shows. It was really overall great, though I do think the back grounds need a little work and the jumping animations at 0:11 and 2:59 could probably use a bit more emphasis on stretching to give it a little more umphf. I loved it, though, so keeping making good material, dude!
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Yeah I've never been too great a backgrounds... I gotta practice that along with pushing my poses lol Thanks a lot for the feedback!
Im digging it dude, this shows you dont need voices to portray a funny scene, this had alot love put into as i can see and i hope you keep up the great work!!!
I will! Thank you!
That was really good, I like your art style!
Thank you very much!
Pretty good. The end caught me by surprise and I genuinely laughed.
In that case, Mission: COMPLETE!