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Kerbal Space Adventure: Cold

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The fourth episode in the series, a bit of an odd one this time around.
If you're interested in seeing more of this series you can check out the other three videos either on my newgrounds profile or from this youtube playlist
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL1eIi0s-Rd-wK7INXeOOii6oZbT7sqveQ


Music Used:
Our Story Begins Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com)
Licensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0 License
http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/


"One-eyed Maestro" Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com)
Licensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0 License
http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/

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"There comes a time in your life when you gotta buckle down and say 'I am insane' and you just gotta roll with it."

You have no idea how much I relate to that lol.

I liked the concept of this but the execution was a bit off. The script needed to be shortened and made tighter, and the animation/art should have more variation in it. It gets visually boring after a point and the humor gets old. If this was cut down to a minute of the funniest moments it would be a stronger piece.

It's okay that you have virtually no actual animation in this since I assume that's the style you're going for but that means the script and voice acting are going to be doing all the heavy-lifting and I don't think they're quite at that level yet.

Keep at it!

Talverty responds:

Very valid criticisms, I ended up doing quite a few rewrites for the script this episode as I had a general idea of what needed to happen to advance the story, I just didn't know how to accomplish it.

I do generally want the videos to be around this length so I have enough time to turn things around at the end/develop events. I think the current issues caused by the length are more just side effects of my own inexperience/incompetence.

Thanks for the feedback! I'll try as much as I can to improve on these issues and I'll see what the next one looks like.

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