Mermaid;
The first full animated short in quite a few years now!
The video seems to make a weird screeching sound for a split second right at the beginning, but this is only something it's doing on NewGrounds so I'm unsure what the issue is.
Nice story
This was a nice flash movie you have here I like the way the story Played out on this one and the visuals are pretty good too it was a good idea that came alive and you added a twist no changes needed on this good animation
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this good story
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I love your style man keep it up
More like the mermaids of myth than the ones Disney made popular. :) Nice twist making it a fish though. Simple, but well-animated! And no need for narration to understand. Nice short.
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Very nice style, i like the simplicity of the shapes and the character design is nailed. I think the scene onboard deserves some movement, we saw the boat going up and down on the waves and then the boat stops moving. Keep up the good work.
Great job. The idea was simple, but really well executed and the fish looked incredibly horrifying. Did not give it 5 stars just because of that audio glitch at 8 seconds, it was not very comfortable to hear through headphones...
Thankyou!
I can understand the frustration at the sound, I'm still trying to figure out why that is.
I've re-uploaded the video to NG a few times now with a few tweaks but it doesn't seem to be making any difference.
Odd that it's only happening on this site too.