You have a nice idea

So this was a pretty good idea here with some nice efforts as this was pretty solid I love the quality you show in this one and I have to say this is a good film I wouldn't mind more fancy effects and such but overall with all that said it's pretty good stuff so keep up the good work and keep these comming anyways nice job hope to see more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More flashy effects

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Well that was different. XD So simple. So genius.

-cd-

This could be a frontpager, perhaps some kind of award winner I can see it. It's short and sweet, it's clever, decent, great job! You really didn't over think this too much, I can see you didn't over do it and it's clearly not under developed. This I think is truly representative of community content here on NG; not something to just clutter up the portal and not something on the other end that would just be bending over and asskissing a trending thing, you actually did your own thing and you did it good.