Perfection.

Wow

I have to say this was really good I like it though and you have a good story here some really nice script work on this one so nice job indeed love the visuals too a nice flick here and look forward to another episode

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice animation no changes needed for improvement

~X~

Really cool can't wait to see next part

Yup. Hooked. Brain crack. More, please.

YES
also i accidentally voted 2 ;-;