What to say about this...
It wasn't funny in my opinion, in fact all the references were somewhat cringeworthy (most references are when the joke is "LEL REFERENCES XDDD", so that isn't really a surprise). The animation is...more of a slideshow really, but this is understandable, since it's basically a vlog in animated form.
Which makes me wonder why this was posted here in the first place, but I digress.

The 2.5 stars come from the nice visuals. I mean, it's not very well animated and the character design is not at all original since it's just another pony, but the stills look nice and the transitions definitely look good. I understand that it's trying to be cute, but the cuteness here feels a little forced.
I don't think I can provide much advice here other than "references are not inherently funny, jokes are funny". I know you can do better animation wise since I saw your undertale video.

this is so fucking cute

This is surprisingly cute. Both anime and MLP. LOVE IT

Strangely I also find this surprisingly well acted....I think as long as you act a lil more naturally, i mean...this actually for some reason sounds better than eng dub performance...

Very eager to see more and I'm becoming a fan already haha

I find both voices very fun and enjoyable, innocent and light-hearted. I can really feel the amount of love and effort put into all this, and seeing your work brightens up my day.

The Art Style And The Voice Acting Is Really Cute. I liked it :)

I came for the JoJo reference. And I actually enjoyed this! Keep up the good work!