The fat man is the story of this fat man who reaches his home by a fall. The fall takes him to his house. This Animation is made by Alfin Davis. Anyone who is intrested to work with toonsix animations just message me (PM). we are also the one who created PENCIL THE ANIMATOR series. We required animators and voice actors. PM me!
Okay, reading your description this was not your first animation and still you made a stick animation based on such a simple story, i don't know if this was just for fun, but you seriously have to improve your content, learn to draw, learn to animate and learn how to create an interesting story. This had none of that.