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Muybridge/Monster Walk Cycle

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Hi, this is for a project for college. I'd really love some feedback and especially if you could answer the following questions:


How old are you and what's your gender?
(I need to know the demographic my animations appeals to)
What principals of animation can you see that I have used?
Is the music fitting?
Do you think it runs smoothly?
And any other comments you have are much appreciated! Please give me feedback on this. ;w; It would be prefered if you focused mostly on the creature and it's running cycle! Try not to focus on the background too much, I know it isn't very good and doesn't move properly ;w;


Thank you! I really do appreciate any feedback I recieve and any criticism. If by any chance you also saw this on youtube https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1D9ZiNJr-iw it's also me so don't worry about this being stolen XD

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i'm male and 31, as creepy as it looks its a job well done. There's one thing i would suggest though and that's slow it down just slightly, you cant see the detail you've put into the body also it makes the front leg look out of sync like its moving faster than the other three.

AshiraWormHouse responds:

Thank you for your critique! I really do appreciate what you said, and I do agree, it's quite fast. Thank you haha ;3;

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Feb 25, 2017
4:44 PM EST
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