I think this could be funny, but I couldn't really understand most of the words. The timing wasn't bad, just try to work on your enunciation.
Yeah, short little animation of band members bc I am a band obsessed loser :^)
(my voice acting in this is bad, I know)
(and I did a bad job at drawing Josh, whoops)
I think this could be funny, but I couldn't really understand most of the words. The timing wasn't bad, just try to work on your enunciation.
Yeah, my voice acting sucks lmao
Lots of room for improvement...
Sound was probably the only good thing here, and it felt like you were just droning on. Don't use the same recording of 'Don't say" every time, changing how you say it can add some flavor to the video.
Animation or lack there of I should say. You essentially made a less interesting slide show, there are ways to use a less art style, or to do a slide show far better. But sticks with no animation on a white background is not it.
The plot/concept is fine, but you could go farther with it. Maybe even go as far as to make video shorts of what the person looks like saying that kinda thing.
All and all you at least made a working animation, but needs A LOT of improvement.
Okay, thanks for the advice!