Astronaut James Clark has been chosen to be the second man to travel to the red planet. He must record his findings and return home safely.
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LexaHergon summarized it well. Some quiet background music would enhance the creepy, ominous feel of this animation. While the art and animation are quite basic, I really have to applaud this animatinon - it takes a good ten minutes working to establish a mood and tell a story, and that's a lot more ambitious than one sees in many flash movies. Keep it up!
Nice story. The twist was weird but better weird than predictable.
Once the character arrives mars, some subtle background music (or even just atmospheric noise) would benefit the story telling and overall vibe.
Art style and animation are rough, but some more practice can fix that; Keep creating.
Thank you. I appreciate the constructive criticism.