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Short Original Fight

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My characters Kojima and Daemon duke it out! A battle between the two most powerful god tier beings alive! Warning! May contain spoilers about my original series.Made in Easytoon, paint.net hitfilm and movie maker.
Music by: Sirius Beat - Anti Hero
Link: https://youtu.be/Os1pjMFU6ak

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Yo I'm a paint.net animator too and i'd really appreciate it if you could help me with a animation i'm working on. It's basically a dragon ball super fan animation with goku black and goku. If you're interested at all get back to me.

Jamoo79 responds:

I can't help right now as I'm still working on a project. I'll let you know when I'm able to.

Interesting but I think the font needs work. It doesn't match.

Jamoo79 responds:

I thought so too. I used movie maker for the font, and it's kind of irritating getting it to look right. Luckily I have a better program for fonts now.

The animation is pretty cool and decent.

Great effects work. work on the backgrounds though. I'm surprised you're able to do this with easytoon. I'd say use less still shots or if your gonna have that many still shots in there use a more dynamic pan or keep something moving. Also, this does seem a bit generic naruto anime-ish, but it still looks good.

Basical anime stuff, shounen like a shounen you can randomly find. You would need to do a lot of work on preeeeeety much everything. Voice acting(please do this in English), background music(find some interesting and fast rhythms), animation(why so blue?(don't worry here, you'll get better)), uniqueness(why not add some non-regular backstory and original moves, not kamehameha or hadoken mirrors) and lenght of the animaton(you could have done something as a start when they meet and what happened after). Fix these tiny holes in your work, or it will sink down. You don't really deserve 4/5 stars for this, but it's for the future that, I hope, you will achieve.

Jamoo79 responds:

Sorry for the super super late response. I wasn't sure what you meant by kamehameha and hadouken mirrors. I left out certain parts so it might have looked similiar to those techniques. There were some original attacks in this video, but I didn't add voices for them.

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Uploaded
Feb 2, 2017
11:00 AM EST
Genre
Action