With some better voice acting and writing this could be a dime if not a penny, but you made do with what you had, i respect that, and the editing was fantastic, i do hope you improve your animations and show us something truly masterful very shortly. I'll be expecting more terrific work from you, and great work.

~M~

Not bad dude, voice acting is a little scratchy, but overall great comedy quality and great grasp of editing :) you gained a follower good sir!!!