Oi dudes, what's up! I just finished this animation.
This was actually meant to be a filler video, but it just kinda consumed me for a bit. OH WELL.
Oh, wait, I need to give credit.
So I made all of the sound effects, except for the background crowd ambiance. That was soundbible.com. They have a lot of royalty-free stuff. It's great.
The background song was made by my boi Kevin Macleod, the song's called Lobby Time, here's the proper credit:
"Lobby Time" Kevin Macleod (incompetech.com)
Licensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0 License
http://creativecommons.org/licenses/b...
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Ok, now that we got the credits down, it's time to give you some LINKS!! (pls follow me on twitter and Youtube)
Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCV4zJi-aPYfv7Fp20_C4FwA
Twitter: https://twitter.com/Urbfilms
Tumblr: http://urbfilms.tumblr.com/
Fun
Well I have to say this was cool I like the camera views on this that was pretty different a good little story you have here I wouldn't mind more longer depth into the story but this was still pretty good and well animated a fun little flash entry here keep it up
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and more in depth with the story
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I love the way they say souP
lmao, very nicely delivered! Wouldv'e been great even with just the steaming bowl of soup as the credits roll, but the added receipt was the real icing on the cake. Feels kinda strange that the camera pans out and all the customers look at them when the guy starts getting intense - considering the voice acting doesn't hint at any actual added vocal intensity, but apart from that both animation and voicing's perfect. A simple thing scripted in such a way the entertainment value's really maxed out. Love it.
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Wow, thank you so much! Yeah, I definitely understand that point about the voice intensity, I'll work on it in the future. But thank you for your kind words, it means a lot!
The lipsync and facial expressions were really good.
It drew me into the animation.
The voice acting was hilarious, because both character sounded like they had a "lisp"
(If you don't know what a "lisp" is, look it up)
This was enjoyable.
Nice.
thanks