Lol

Ok so there are some jokes in this one and was pretty funny could use more random jokes but the animation was notbad and the story was pretty good too a good flash animation hee just ad a few more jokes for next time

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Some more random jokes would be good

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Dark, Yet Cool! She should have hit him with a snake. Great animation dude.

Well that was insane.

It looked a bit like invader zim ant it was awsome

Welp, can't say the jokes got to me. I find this shory very... cheezy.
Haha get it?
Get it?
In all seriousness, it was short, nice looking, to the point, I like it.