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LOL this was funny, it does need some improving though such as some play buttons and probably an stop action code to stop the looping, you may also want to improve on the graphics such as improved backrounds with color and such.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improved graphics, aswell as some propper play buttons.
Simple and funny in a wacky way.
Are the greatest man to ever grace the universe with your presence.
i dont know if ye like yer stuff but i think its fuckin great im more entertained by your shit than anyone elses
Dude,What the hell was that? You seriously try to hard. You need to get a life buddy geeez! Is your whole life based around sitting at your computer making shite movies that don't even make sense? I mean....ugh! I think your head is so far up your ass theres no room for your boyfriend.....Take my advice.....get some money and go buy a better life.
Have a nice day:)
I need to get a life from someone who actually took the time to write a review to some movie I didn't even spend more than five minutes on, and who'se favorite submissions to Newgrounds include a trace job flash, and a dating sim?
Ok, while this film starts out fairly slow, the sudden break from the scene into the words and explosion adds a unique sense of humor to the piece. However, you could try speeding things up a bit, and perhaps adding a storyline. In addition, the artwork could use a few touchups, but I think you made a decent attempt.