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MC Hank VS hAnK

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In my first animation a guy tell me who my first animation are very fast to be a first animation,so this is my 2nd movie if you are reading this i will to say then i'm a begineer..i can't be a professional in a day.

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its good for a beginner :v
you want work with me ?
i am a beginner too
Want ?


LightsOFF responds:

Thanks.K


It's honestly way too fast, and too hard to know what's going on. And I don't care if your not a pro, i'm still gonna say what you need to do to make this good. Hank is too small in the car, and his hands are wayy to big for his body in the car as well. And the whole scene from him getting in the helicopter just went way to fast. The overall animation could be much more smoother, and more blood could be nice. Again, it's also SUPER fucking fast, the helicopter landing and leaving scene went like a snap. Gun sounds and the actual firing are delayed. The camera zooms in unevenly and hank when going into the door does not dissapear at the right time, quick but noticeable. How is hank zooming across the room with that little aura? What the hell is that? And what's the smack noise at 19 seconds in? Also this is very short. Make it at least a minute or two long next time as well.


LightsOFF responds:

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Lots of little things to fix, the biggest thing is the jerk that's happening with the camera, try to keep it from making the jerking or sudden movements, it's really disorienting and should be used sparingly.


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LightsOFF responds:

I khow and i said who i'm starting i can't be a professional in 1 day.


Pretty good for your secound time, maybe a little more frames in between.


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Thanks

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100
Score
2.83 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 4, 2017
9:50 PM EST
Genre
Action
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