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Adam & Steve's Prehistoric Adventures - Pilot Episode

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In the first episode of The Prehistoric Adventures of Adam and Steve, our naughty patriarchs are given orders from the all-loving God 'o gods to populate the dangerous new world. Don't miss the first chapter of their adventure of biblical proportions, Baby Rabies by the Euphrates!

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I usually vote very high, but this is too bad. You have decent animating skills, I would suggest making animations with clear lines and color, cartoony. Keep making animations, but make it in another style. You could become a very good animator.

Sumerias1 responds:

Thanks for the critique! Yeah, this was my first attempt at hand drawing my own images. I wanted it to have a raw lines on paper look, but it came out nearly unwatchable since the lines blend together so much. It's a shame. A lot of work went into this, but it had a flawed design. I have 3 episodes altogether. The second once has some design improvements, but they're too subtle to really make a difference. For episode 3, I studied up on editing and scriptwriting and made the episode full color. The color really makes everything pop and the plot and characters develop a bit. I think what I need to do, if I continue this series (I originally wanted 13 episodes) is to remake the 1st two episodes. Episode 3 really shines and I'd like the 1st two eps to work as well as it does. I thing there's a neat series here, but I don't think too many people would keep watching after the 1st two episodes. Thanks again for your opinion :)

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2.93 / 5.00

Dec 7, 2016
8:47 PM EST
Comedy - Original