The story was funny, but the animation isn't very good. I personally can't make better animations, you're very good. Just don't make them too quickly.
Hello! I am a beginner animator. I uploaded my welcome video here and got heat against the thread and i apoligize for that. But anyway this is a pretty funny video I made. If you are interested my channel is below.
channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC7lA-_6jngOjjC2SYFRszOQ?tbft=1
The story was funny, but the animation isn't very good. I personally can't make better animations, you're very good. Just don't make them too quickly.
The story and the way you told it wasn't that bad, but the drawing and lines look messy to say the least.
A little weird, and kinda poorly (really choppily) animated/drawn. Kinda sounds like stories my friends used to tell me in middle school, which were mildly funny, so I can deal. Serves the purpose.