Ohmy
Wow That was an interesting piece I do like the "FRAME-BY-FRAME" style on this and the artistic backround and use of color even the "STORY" was kind of cute you had some nice twist in the story and made it really interesting seems like you could have made it go a tad bit longer but for waht it is its a good submission.
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seems like you could have made it go a tad bit longe
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