I like it
Alright so this was pretty good and I really like how you presented this There was some nifty scnes and what not, but mostly you have a nifty and unique submission here, so I cant wait to see how the rest comes out, and hope you keep making stuff like this. You have an Extraordinary flash entry, And I am Officially a new fan of this style and your work. I love how it started off with some black and white and changed up.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added flashy effects would be a nice idea.