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Broken Melody

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ghost girl in a house.... pretty much it.

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There's a lot of smooth, nice animation, but then there's a bunch of snappy movement like the flashlight clipping onto his belt, the zipper bag opening, and the cobwebs that really took me out of it.
Otherwise good work!

BitterBrushAnimation responds:

yeah alot of technical errors.... but i really needed to complete a project rather then getting wrapped up in the details..... ill work my way up to having that luxury ... i appreciate your feedback .... its good to know that took u out of it... :) i hope you will continue to follow and criticize me in the future... it helps alot!

Very Good ! Really good Details and dat animation M8

BitterBrushAnimation responds:

^.^" i appreciate the compliment .... while i still think this is lacking ... i am going to continue pushing my story telling and animation skills... this is only my second film so i got alot to learn... Thank you for your kind encouragement.

only four star lost a star by not giving her a ghostly friend ....bastard she the cutest ghost ive ever met.

BitterBrushAnimation responds:

Probably the best case scenario i could imagine for losing a star... XD im Glad you got that attached. its encouraging . Thank you very much!

The ghost girl just wanted a new friend to play with. Nicely done animation.

good one

Credits & Info

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1,758
Faves:
5
Votes
155
Score
3.87 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 28, 2016
5:17 PM EDT
Genre
Experimental
  • Daily 2nd Place October 30, 2016