Nice

So this was cool the movements seems ok and I like the idea and seems to have some smooth movements this film seemed more like a test then anything else but overall it was a good test the character is nice and there are some things to be improved on but I do like what you have prepared here would love a full finished product though but anyways ad more to this in the future would love to see more of the character design and such anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A finished product and more to it as well

~X~

Nipp!e

Please don't submit tests or unfinished items to the Portal. That's not what it's for. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>"Jump to Forum"). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

Seems like it's going to be an interesting game! :) Nice attention to jiggle and expression, though flips and similar don't feel 100% authentic. Nice work.

-cd-