Fluent, and better than the original, but where's the orange juice?
Don't think you needed the "It's time to Dance" text to explain the final scene. :) It's getting better though! The weapons do fly slow, but the action's getting smoother and smoother, better detail too (though could be better still). Keep it going!
Hmm... There are corrections, but the problems are the same. Characters not strong twitched, this fix, but weapons still fly slowly. Sounds weapons of good, there is little action. Put... 3 stars! Not bad! There is some of the problems you need to fix. Good luck!
Derpiest faces ever XD