This was not good and a lill bad..

ill do overal imediatly to make it shorter..

Overall : it was kinda rushed...
and it was goin a littlebit to fast.
make the fps a little lower.
but your graphics and style was good.
nice hair with it, and a nice style.

for ur first flash movie its a great start

Pointless

You should of put more stuff, like a replay button, a play button, credits, etc. If this flash was one of your first ones then jood job then. Try something easier like a sprite animation.

Better

this is much better than your first one al though the backround i belive is off of LF2 also, (my spellin sucks monkey dick) I liked the ending but you need to make longer or use lower fps it happen so fast, i saw the guy jump i blinked it was done. u kinda get the point glad you used your own characters unlike your other 1..
GOOD JOB

meh

too fast, has no plot, and doesn't have any choices or user interactivty, it was pretty good the way you put in a background i guess, but... meh.

You gotta stop hiding

You have got to stop hiding behind this 'only constructive criticism' and 'you cant say its bad because you havent made a flash movie' Crap. Dont submit your movies to newgrounds if you cant handle people talking bad about it, if your worried about the price why are you in the shop?. and you have gotta take your head out of your ass and realise that just because people who are members at newgrounds havent submitted movies doesnt mean they have never made one, dipshit. Ive seen your work and the only one that even measured up to flash movie standard is 'A change from a stickfight' which itself needs work. but im not going to completely just bitch about your attitude and then just leave heres some 'constructive criticism' try using the storylines from Chibz with the graphics and sprite work from a change from a stckfight.