Not bad

There were a number of positives to come out of this short even though the lack of sound was a major problem. I thought the elephant crashing into the house was a great idea and the way you displayed what the characters were saying was creative. The joke at the end was kinda strange but it suited your flash overall. Nice job with the series, you seem to be getting funnier as these go along.

Try better next time...

I hope this was a 5-year-old who did this, because that’s what it looked like. There was no sound at all. Story needs to be well thought next time. Learn how to draw.

well..

no sound, duh

bt besdie that it was super el the cool

if you added sound, it would be perfect
i really like "im from the australia"
so yeah
it superocked

Feces!

Roy is a dink and he is really mean. He got what was coming to him!

Shit. Absolute shit.

No sound. bad humour. no decent graphics. that is a waste of space time and effort. use motion tweening to stop it being so jerky.