beautiful, fast-paced, flawless animation.
it might be short, but its nicely animated, detailed, and very, VERY interesting...
the mans(?) face expression as (s)he is holding the dead woman is very shocking, since (s)he is smiling, and thats a very crazy/wild smile, i might add... :O
i also liked how the person's headband/ribbon flew away, and over the city, revealing to us the place of the tragedy, and thus marking the start of the epic drama...
great animation!
good drawings of the characters, flawless, detailed face expressions, and an interesting story as well!
this will be an epic manga story, if you will animate the whole thing.
keep it up, you are great!