I dont want to ruin things but. This felt weak as in We have no idea what the bloody hell is going on. Please go back to a storyboard and craft a well written story that we the viewer can call it content and yourself to expand upon.

It is always being judge based on Story, art, music. You can have a Silent film and a great story that will make it a 5 star easy. but when you lack a story this just feel like a brown turd. Go read up about good story telling and express what you want us the viewer to gain from your movie.